11.02.2016

NaNoWriMo 2016, Day 2: Bren's Tale, contd. (1243 words)

Fifteen days out from the village, the caravan was within an approachable distance.  It began to loom before him, a blur of movement and shimmering color against the sands. For the first time, it occurred to him to be worried, but by this time, they had seen him.  First one, then another, then three of the riders on the outskirts of the tented wagons gave a shout, then erupted into a high-pitched yelling that was song-like in its intensity.  Had he intended harm—he, a solitary traveler—he would almost certainly have reconsidered; as it was, he resisted the impulse to turn and run, since there was nowhere to run, and to flee would likely signal guilt, and cost him his life.  These thoughts ran through his head as he steadied his legs and proceeded, clutching his whittling knife from instinct rather from a real sense that it would protect him—it would not.  The nearest horseman pulled up several yards ahead and stopped.  He seemed to be a kind of scout—the slow caravan would take a bit longer to approach, giving him time to dispatch the stranger if harm or trouble were meant.  He called out a single syllable that Bren did not understand, pointed, then laid his tall stick—perhaps a standard rather than a weapon—on his lap and held up his hand.  No doubt, Bren thought, the others had arrows aimed at his heard.  He forced his hand to relax, the whittling knife falling back into his pocket.  Then he withdrew his hands—not too slowly, not so fast as to case alarm—and held them in front of him, palms facing up, signaling his peaceful intent.  The rider nodded, whistled to his left and right, and dismounted.

To say that Bren froze would perhaps be accurate, though he did so out of apprehension rather than panic, or so he tried to tell himself.  He saw the staff—whether weapon, he could not tell—change hands, passed to a rider on a tawny colored horse, and a second rider dismounted, coming to the side of the first.  The first looked Bren in the eye, and he saw a fierce sparkle under their thick brows.  He heard several rapid syllables, accompanied by a gesture that seemed designed to call forth something from him, but he merely stood, bewildered.  The first rider nodded to the second, who spoke to Bren from deep in the throat, but he shook his head. He knew only a little of a language that was not his own; he learned it from some boys who had come to stay in the village when he was young.  Now those few words and phrases circled his head as he wondered whether he should try to form them into sentences.  They resembled the first rider’s speech more closely, but none of those syllables held meaning for him.  The riders looked at one another, and first one and then the other gave a sharp nod, as if deciding something.  The first pulled from a pocket a colored scarf, and the other did likewise. They seized his wrists with a firm grip, but not a rough one, and tied his wrists together in front of him.  Then, holding his elbows on either side, they marched him forward, the staff-bearing rider falling behind.  By this time, Bren realized, the caravan had halted fully, spreading around him like its own colorful city.

Vaguely, Bren wondered whether he might be able to escape. The scarves were not tight, and his captors were slight and held him loosely.  But he didn’t consider it seriously.  He was on their territory—at any rate, their territory had engulfed him—and he needed food.  He had supplies to barter.  When they bound him—symbolically, he thought, because yes, he could escape—they did not bother to remove his large pack or the bags strung about him.  Time enough to seize them when they reached their destination, he supposed.

The caravan apparently traveled in the same configuration that it settled in, Bren surmised from the determination with which his captors led him through the mobile tents.  He began to see eyes and limbs poking through doors, but he was urged ahead every time he cocked his head to one side, so he did not see complete people, only shapes and shadows and parts—and not so many, even of these.  From what he could see, the tents were mostly rounded on the bottom, the bottoms themselves made from either wood or metal.  They stood about waist-high off the ground. Bright pinks, oranges, and reds hung loose but not limp from the shapes.  Though the outer layers fluttered in the breezes, there did seem to be some foundational fabrics secured inside the base.  Alina would have been intrigued.  Bren had never seen such light fabrics, or such rich dyes.  Here and there, a horse and rider were stationed. 

There was a darker tent toward the back—through the eight or so that surrounded him.  This seemed to be the one to which they were leading him.  At the base of it, they paused, and a short ladder was folded from the inside down.  This close, Bren could see the wheels at the base, and the carvings and inscribed characters on the base.  It was good workmanship, and a jealous admiration crept behind his eyes.  He stiffened his movements a bit.  Misunderstanding, his guards adjusted their pressure.  They shoved him up into the tent.  When he stumbled forward, however, they caught him.  He nodded and relaxed.  After all, pride and jealousy were equally useless to him at the moment.

The inside of the tent was larger than it at first appeared.  It was, like the exterior, black, though there were other colors, still mostly dark, on the floor, the draperies, and some cushions.  The first rider gestured for him to sit.  He shrugged and did so.  Then, they left.

Bren had lowered himself onto an elbow when he felt rather than saw a rustling of the tent opening.  The first rider had returned, bearing food.  Bren sat up abruptly and for a moment, stared.  She—yes, she—had removed the swath of fabric from her neck, face and hair.  Her eyes were keen and dark, unyielding but not unkind. Bren nodded with respect and gratitude.  The tray she carried had a base—sort of an inverted cone—on the bottom, and acted like a table when but down near him.  She untied his wrists and nodded to the food.  “Thank you,” he said.  Her eyes widened, then she nodded briefly, and withdrew to the door.

The food consisted of a bread spread with a nutty paste and some dried fruit—traveler’s fare—and also a refreshing broth, clear and warm but not hot, salty but refreshing.  Bren ate gratefully, feeling—for the moment—more fortunate than not.  He sipped from a clear bowl a sweet drink that put him in mind of cider. 

He was soon finished, but not satisfied.  His stomach gurgled in the most alarming manner, and he felt a cramp.  Groaning, he doubled over, and as the feeling passed, he became dizzy.  Poison!  The word flooded his mind, and he groped toward his pack, a scant foot away.  One of the mushrooms, he knew, would cure most poisons, but the edges of his sight were fuzzy, and he groped as if through tunnel before all went black. 

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